Writing Warmup

Tuesday's writing warmup we had to write a story that used a pencil, boot and $5 note. We only had 8 minutes to write it. This is my story.

Once upon a time there lived a little boy named Oliver. One day Oliver went to by a pencil with his $5 note. He almost forgot to put on his gumboots. So he walked down the road to get a pencil.

Writing Warmup-Proof reading

Today for our writing warmup we are learning to proof read our writing. You can see my proof reading in red.



Three         friends                                       when one tripped
three friend went racing through the forest wen 1 trippd on a branch. Andy fell and

                                      others                      realising .
broke his leg while the oters carried on not realisig