Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Writing Warmup-Proof reading

Today for our writing warmup we are learning to proof read our writing. You can see my proof reading in red.



Three         friends                                       when one tripped
three friend went racing through the forest wen 1 trippd on a branch. Andy fell and

                                      others                      realising .
broke his leg while the oters carried on not realisig

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