Blue
Blue is the Dolphin sprouting out of the ocean while doing a triple flip in the air.
Blue is the fabric dancing in the salty sea air.
Blue is a sapphire glimmering and shimmering in the fresh air..
Blue is the beautiful roses' blooming in the fresh new soil.
Blue is the big thunder clouds pouring with splashy rain.
Blue is the big whale with his big blue tail.
Blue is the sparkling kite dancing and prancing in the sky.
Blue
By Alex
Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI love reading your writing because I can tell that you have really thought hard about the vocabulary you want to use to make it interesting for people to read. Did you know you have used some personification in your poem? Personification is when you describe something that isn't human as doing something a human would do. Can you spot two lines of your poem where you have used personification?
From Mrs Head
To Mrs head
ReplyDeleteSo far I have spotted one of those sentences.I am pritty sure it is this Blue is the beautiful roses' blooming in the fresh new soil.